This emotional storm
Shows time is running out
As I am consumed
Within my self doubt
There’s no one else left
I must ran and hide
To my favorite place
I will subside
(Here I stand in my sacred place
All alone just wasting space)
Memories repeat
Confronting my past
My thoughts slowly unwind
Acceptance at last!!
This place brings hope,
I somewhat feel ok
In this place forever
Forever I will stay!
(Here I stand in my sacred place
All alone just wasting space)
Author notes
user name: hopelessly-broken
pic promt: http://trixypixie.deviantart.com/art/mourning-place-75349328
i hope you like it!!! =]
it was a great pic to write about.
A contest entry
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Interesting. It didn't have too much imagery though but that's still good. The take on the prompt was snazzy. Thank you for entering and good luck =D
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