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Broken Destruction

 

Broken Destruction

 

 

 

I was kind to you before but *bunny* it was time for me to flip the script. I am tired of looking like the bad guy it was you who did me wrong and now the tables are about to turn. I have been the best guy I could’ve been to you. I have a lot of love for you besides I will kill someone over you. But why should I do that when you can’t even trust me for *bunny*? I gave you everything you ever wanted but you know what, its about that time I break the code so no more will I sit back and let you do this to me. I am not here to talk with you but I am here to talk about you and what you did. I am not your *bunny* and I never will be. So get that *bunny* straight alright because you took my heart and you broke it so you know what? You’re going to learn not to *bunny* with me if you don’t know what I mean then you will soon find out. This *bunny* here its not over yet!

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  • shouldbe123
    July 11
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    hell yeah jewels is right i do think you are talking about me???? but i am fillen diz


  • Ephiphany gold member
    July 9

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    I am so happy to see young Poets

    take the stand this was definately full of raw emotions, and I truly understand and have been there myself. Deeply hurt by the one you can your heart too. Truly this is an amazing piece, and I commend you again for taking the stand and standing for what you believe in.

    Keep writing.
    All the best,
    ephiphany

  • Interesting young man

    If you are Julias' folk, or if she is your mentor
    I can understand it. GOOD JOB young man.

  • it amaze me how far you have come with the writing hon but i am glad your sticking with it. I was in awe reaing this and new yaul been arund aunt jewels to long with my bad mouth you know Daijah going to think you wrote this about her

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