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I Feel As If..............

I Feel As If........

 

 

I ‘m confused as if a man having to choose between his mom and his own life . I ‘m mad as if a man that just found out someone has killed his little brother and no one knows who did it. I feel dead as if a man that is causing death but no one noticing what he is doing .I ‘m determined as if a man just been dying to know if he is going to heaven . I feel so high as a bird flying in the winds floating on air but to all these things I ask myself, why ? Maybe I’ m getting a sign are something maybe I will never know why.

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I Feel As If
My First poem I am adding
But I write a lot so
will add more when
I get a chance.
My aunt did the b.g.
For me.

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  • secberm
    July 19

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    Well done, brother. Ambitious and emoional write. Keep writing and keep expressing yourself. One.

    Dez

  • i love this to damn bro this was straight to you young guys have the best mentor i promise you dat your aunt is a trip but me i respect her writing just keep it up i barely been writing a year but i picked up a lil style we going to have to do a collab one day like it

  • Qua Ii am going to book mark this i love this level of writing we still going to do a family compilation book when i can get all my stuff out the way you have soul for your age but you around me and just life so it makes your writing eye wise i love this baby aunt jewels