Your whispered words of solitude
touched my heart that lay in pieces,
You showed me the way in heart-break's night
and let me love you,
Your beauty astounds me in numerous delicate ways,
your serenity and serendipity is endless,
You whispered words of a life with me
calmed my darkest tormented thoughts,
You sewed my heart together with the threads of longing
passion and your promises of eternity
hang above my humble heart,
You my love, my fallen angel, you complete me,
In such a time when I found you,
I felt like I would never love again,
Like a damaged butterfly, my wings
were ripped and colourless,
You bring that colour back to me
the butterfly effect,
One thing you do begins another,
Making me believe again,
Hearts entwined in love's embrace,
Free from cobwebs in the mind,
Dew-dropped tears of nothingness
fade to black,
My sun rises with you and sets the same,
You're my compass in these lonely woods
you're in my heart now and there you are rooted for my life,
You gave me the gift of hope,
softly sighing to my words,
Now I return that gift,
I thought I'd lost the will inside,
To live and to be loved,
But you my darling rainbow angel,
are my multicoloured little butterfly,
You captured every piece of me
as you smiled and whispered "I love you"
Eventually I will be there in your arms,
until then, you won't leave my beating heart,
It's my turn now...to take you under my wing,
Author notes
hope yuou like this x
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this was very very good. I'm interested in knowing what genre it would be sang in. I love the words and the story. Good job and thanks
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It's a musical theatre style mezzo soprano range heartbreak ballad number
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Very good poem here
In life we find their are love in ways we so desire and love of a friend and companion . To save ones hearts make sure this love you so speak of here is one unlaced with drugs .Bring forth the purest love free of any medications for then you shall know love as it was meant to be
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Beautiful
I love reading your writing. I can relate in some ways to you with me being bipolar nos and my girlfriend suffering with DID. You make so much sense. I hope you can keep it together.
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aww wow sweetie this poem is so beautiful,
i know she does love this as much as us readers do,
im so glad you found someone like her because this is so beautiful such a wonderful dedication,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
awww.. I have a tear in my eye. thank you so much hunnie. I love you x
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this is truly amzeing
soft and loveing
powerful as well
i love you auntie
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