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Simple Love

The love that grows too strong
Bleeds the colour of hatred and lust
I just want to pour my heart out to you
I want to scream, I want to trust
 
Your very presence leaves me cold
I'm bitter because I can not have you
I just wish I could hold you
But there's nothing I can do
 
You're out of my reach
And out of my touch
I just with I didn't
Have to love you this much.

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  • MaliceInWonderland
    July 9

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    this seemed very stiff and cold....almost detatched, and it seemed like you compromised the rest of the poem for your rhyme scheme....I can totally relate to the feeling though.