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Letting Go

This girl, she's had enough...

Wings fallen beneathe her,

She collapses to the ground,

Shaking all but the world,

Crying so helplessly,

"I give up, you can have me..."

 

This girl, she can't help you

She's fallen now, too deep to care...

Crying all her bloody tears,

She's ripping out her own hair.

How is she to help you,

When she can't find a reason to?

 

This girl, she's had enough...

Tears form a lake beneathe her,

Poor girl, you've hurt her bad,

She tried to help you fix your world...

Crying so helplessly,

"I give up, leave me please"

 

This girl, so helpless now...

Every night- wished upon a star 

Faithfully repeating the thought;

Someone will save her from afar.

She's lonely now, you scarred her...

Stupid selfishness, you stupid girl.

 

This girl, she's had enough...

Arms now bloody from her pain...

But as she sees the dark clouds form

She begins to dance in the rain...

Twirling, whirling, her only release;

"I give up I need to be free"

 

This girl, she's happy now...

Free from your depression wrath.

She dances so carelessly...

No a single doubt to be had.

Leave her now, so she can fly,

Spread her wings and soar so high...

...Without you. 

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  • This poem was absolutely amazing! the word choice was positively fabulous. The poem flowed perfectly, flawlessly. Absolutely amazing!
    Great write!