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Phoenix



Suns are born under her skin
while, whimpering,
words are lost in wide eyes.

She lived between his blinks,
breathing the air he caressed
and yearning for screaming flesh.

Galaxies collapsed,
reborn to the touch
of sharp feathered tongues.

Immolation held no appeal
until domination demanded still skies
and she froze the world

for him.


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So I wrote one, and now I've been told I have to write more. Task indeed.

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  • Tattboyspet silver member
    July 10

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    'She lived between his blinks' -
    BDSM is a way of life and it sinks deep. It's true, i live for Him and His every wish is my command
    an awesome write filled with love and I enjoyed this thoroughly!
    thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us my friend

  • I love this. It's truly brilliant and so full of emotion. I adore the way that you write. You have soooo much talent.
    x


  • Naridill gold member
    July 9
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    Ain't he always everything.
    ^ 'he' not being selective to one.