There's an aftertaste in the air
etching itself within my tongue
envisioning our symphony
entwined with moonlight kisses
This lyrics in my heart
where I hold you close
shall be written
with lips longings
embracing butterfly hopes
of continuing hearts refrain
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Please credit: Imaginary_by_still_uninvited
40 words
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie.. Picture... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 12, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I loved the first line. Aftertaste is amazing. Well, in poetry anyways. I'm not so sure how much I would enjoy tasting it in the air I breathe. *Laughs* Your poem is filled with sweet, and airy imagery. This fits the picture perfectly. 'hearts refrain' is a very pretty line. A very good piece.
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You did a beautiful job.. I really love the flow of this write.. and the softness to it is really wonderful..The imagery was really vivid and detailed..and It's a unique view of the prompt.. I really enjoyed this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best ofluck..
Angel
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Oh yes... this is so beautiful and lovely and such a wonderful take on the picture... Where I saw cold, you saw a wonderful warmth... Well done!
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