In a garden of stone,
reside a fair maiden
Blessed with a gift,
which through beauty was shown
Unparalelled grace,
nigh elven fair
Features of Fey,
resting on her face
Into the air,
she blew a kiss
Enter the butterflies,
emerald and rare
A most divine event,
that thine eyes behold
Up and beyond,
they start their ascent
A maiden of Light,
gifted and mystic
Blessing her Garden,
and leaving in twilight
Author notes
This was picture inspired. This picture credit goes to Imaginary_still_uninvited
A contest entry
- -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment constructively and kindly
Comments
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I can almost see this womans beauty. make me want to meet her. Wel done bro!
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Beautiful
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I loved it
Christina
[y'know after all these comments, I think i'm gunna spell my name wrong]
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*le sighs*
this was nice.
it took me away to someplace mystical for the 30 seconds it took me to read it. and for each consecutive time i read it.
thanks for ur entry. best wishes and best of luck! -
very lovely imagery and cute story. Thanks for entering
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this is a lovely piece of poetry,
the imagery you pen about this woman is amazing,
i really do love this alot,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Ooh this is an beautiful poem :] Nicely chosen words.


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wow. seriously, wow!!!!! :]
this is amazing!

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love it
i love it! it's so pretty and magical and just awesome. I love it and it's a beautiful write! good rhyming, too! Nice job!
~beth

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This is beautifully written whit. I love the last stanza so pretty. Nicely Done


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