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Maiden Fair

In a garden of stone,
reside a fair maiden
Blessed with a gift,
which through beauty was shown

Unparalelled grace,
nigh elven fair
Features of Fey,
resting on her face

Into the air,
she blew a kiss
Enter the butterflies,
emerald and rare

A most divine event,
that thine eyes behold
Up and beyond,
they start their ascent

A maiden of Light,
gifted and mystic
Blessing her Garden,
and leaving in twilight

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This was picture inspired. This picture credit goes to Imaginary_still_uninvited

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  • UnManned4Ever
    December 8, 2008
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    I can almost see this womans beauty. make me want to meet her. Wel done bro!

  • NinaNightmare
    August 20, 2008

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    Beautiful
    =]
    I loved it

    Christina
    [y'know after all these comments, I think i'm gunna spell my name wrong]


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    August 7, 2008

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    *le sighs*

    this was nice.

    it took me away to someplace mystical for the 30 seconds it took me to read it. and for each consecutive time i read it.

    thanks for ur entry. best wishes and best of luck!


  • crazymomma
    July 14, 2008
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    very lovely imagery and cute story. Thanks for entering


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 9, 2008

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    this is a lovely piece of poetry,
    the imagery you pen about this woman is amazing,
    i really do love this alot,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • Aquarius
    July 9, 2008
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    Ooh this is an beautiful poem :] Nicely chosen words.


  • ByeAPCommunity
    July 9, 2008
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    wow. seriously, wow!!!!! :]
    this is amazing!


  • questionmark.
    July 9, 2008

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    love it

    i love it! it's so pretty and magical and just awesome. I love it and it's a beautiful write! good rhyming, too! Nice job!

    ~beth


  • NyteShade
    July 9, 2008
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    This is beautifully written whit. I love the last stanza so pretty. Nicely Done

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