I miss your caress and your touch
That over flowing lingering lust
The tingling between my thighs
The chills down my long spine
The gentle kisses I do miss
on my painted soft parted lips
Your warm breath on my neck
Wondering what would be next
The quiet whispers in my ear
You catch my every tear
Your smile and our laughter
But now its a disaster
Author notes
I do not claim this photo being used with this poem to be my own. Google Images
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything!!! by LivinitupCutie.
450 points, ended July 28, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why Not? by Hebz.
395 points, ended August 24, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Part two soon to come :D
Comments
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Oh My~
Oy! This one tugs hard at the Heartstrings
Swells the eyes and Gosh the images just pull at Spirit! Powerful this is Beautiful~
for some reason I was nudged to read this-
Beautifully penned with emotion
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful
Very touching and so passionate. So very well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Cool piece, i like the first 2 stanzas very!
Thnx for entering & best of luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Beautiful and at the end sad. Good luck in your contests.
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nice arousal dear, thanks for sharing
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It is hard to to get used to everything then suddenly it's all taken away leaving broken..wonderfully written..thank you for entering my contest
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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nice hon you did a very great job with this piece
good luck in the contest i enjoyed this
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what a sad ending that left me wanting more! i feel such a story behind this...each line!
♥rianna♥
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this was nice, i wanted the poem to keep going
good luck
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Que Onda
this is beautiful
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amazing
reading through your work.....everyone is as wonderful as the next.....thank you for the share and hope to read more of your work soon
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very deep piece here artist i think you did a very great lovely job good luck to you in the contest i think you did awesome
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I feel I didn't quite know what was going to happen in this piece, there was quite a shock at the end, this is a beautiful, steamy poem and you're right, people shouldn't judge.
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A very very romantic and loving piece this is too. I like the background, really quite stunning. Your writing shows a softness to it here. Well done. Keep it up.
Darkness
Reigns
Wayne Leon
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This is great
I love it...its beautifuly and soulfully written with just a hint (tee hee) of sensuality..
Good luck!
xx
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your caress
your touch
overflowing lingering lust
tingling between my thighs while touching yours
chills down my spine while moving my finger tip down your sexy spine
your gentle kisses
your soft parted lips
your warm breath on my neck
your delicious whispers
your lustful smile
your sexy laughter
yes...my sweet love!...I want them
all of them...
Wet kisses on your wet areas, cutie!
Galaxy2
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Breathtaking
this piece is. Wow, I love it
Good luck in the contest.
-ephiphany
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