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Dewdrops

Gaze taunting,
ravaging half blooming
petal
anticipating dewdrops

fragrance explode

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10 words


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Julian McMahon

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  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    July 15
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    Oooh. Each word filled with meaning. An excellent work. It punched with staccoed brilliance.


  • Malabu
    July 10

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    wish I could do that to you...
    yey congrates on bronze tatts
    Mally


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    July 9
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    Deeply metaphoric and beautifully detailed... x