Your eyes captivate
your stare
rapes me
with...
brutal lust
Author notes
I Wish!!!!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- yes please by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended July 9, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I wish as well!!!!!!!
Cor blimey mate...gotta go shower!!!!!!!
Love you-xxx
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I wish too... ! Well expressed and engaging... x
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Good stuff.
That's you and the poem, not him.
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I wish too!!!!
This is wickedly good Sue!! Don't you just love Julian!!!!
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...........thud!
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Don't cha mean Stud.....lol, or was that your jaw dropping and hitting the floor.
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I think I surprised him, just a bit!!!
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Sue, Sue,
I AM surprised at you!
So this is what you think of
when you're feeling blue?
A cold bath for you, young lady!
Nice one,
Bill
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I suspect you wanted this writing to last a whole lot longer than ten words!!!
Jeff
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