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Snow Breath

Atop the pinnacle of a lofty dream,
she rose
challenging the air to bluster.

"Touché," the wind replied to her,
then blew her rose away.
For he knew that whispers in a dream,
are not as forceful as they seem.

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40 Words.
Prompt Credit: Imaginary_by_still_uninvited

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 12

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    Ooh!!! this is really unqiue!!! I really loved this!! it just flowed so smooth and softly!You really took a different look at this picture and it shows!!! but I reall ylove it!! you did such a wonderful job with this.. I really love the imagery here as well.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck!


    Angel

  • FieryHollow
    July 9
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    This is excellent, I hope you do good in the contest