The semen drips off my lips,
I surrender to be free.
Trapped in my own prison,
As I long for hell to rescue me.
Screaming into the night,
Will I ever be set free?
I hear Echoes in the distance,
It's only my childhood, leaving me.
A contest entry
- Tell Me A Secret by WillAlwaysLove.
650 points, ended July 30, 2008, 9 entries
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yet again I'm awe stricken, this one particularly almost gave me chills.
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Intense. Stellar.
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Greaet write. Horrific story. The last line really got me. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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ohhh, niceeeeeee. very dark, i like the last line.
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Wow! This is intense !
I'm in awe. Wow! Brief and yet there is a whole story in there. Harsh. Brilliant.
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