She moves like an angel,
her eyes are like gold,
peircing my heart,
and burning my soul.
Serene and surreal,
flowing like a stream,
beauty beyond human,
and face of pale cream.
Feel soft skin,
soft red lips,
tall smooth legs,
on cute wide hips.
Author notes
A story of a woman in my life, one that I refuse to let get away from my grasp. I will fight for her if it takes the rest of my life.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie.... Picture by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Best by Tercil.
300 points, ended October 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The silk is quite enchanting to think that it could almost be heavenly, lovely poem,
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This was pretty lovely. Congrats on the gold.
I love the first stanza...it has a great flow and rhythm.
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Well.. I must say that this was a wonderful take on the prompt.. I'm really surprised by this write actually.. You really made the picture come alive.. You give it a "rhythm" in a way
Thank you very much for sharing.. I really enjoyed this..
Best of luck.
Angel
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Beautiful write.
Lol
the last stanza would make any man wink at your imagination.
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