From nothing
we see normality
we pretend to believe
that we're okay
what the hell is wrong with us
are we so infected with society
so infected that we ignore reality
the reality that has been present
for so long
to our own hell we are heading
and infact
its is to there we are paving a gold plated road
a road most traveled
by sinners and saints
we're not fooling anyone
no matter how hard we try
were ruining ourselves
to a cold hell
we will travel with socity
What do you think in general? Improvements?
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whoo hoo! you rock man!! you are amamzing! keep it up
p.s.(we need to talk more)
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hmmm...
I really like this. Very dark and misterious. I like htat you reffer to hell as cold. An uncommon anology that is.
Way to go! Kudos for you 'cause you so rock!
You are a true poet! Thanks for posting such a wonderful piece and keep up that killer writing!
The Famous Reese Bailey
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