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Barf

Oral caricature
cowers as clot
from hemorrhage
not quite vomit
not worth snot
but rather close
to rotten jesus
far worse than
a regurgitation
twice cycled

A contest entry

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  • aidenspektor
    July 9

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    This is interesting, to say the least. I'm not quite sure I get it, but there's something about it that I like. Nice job, anyways.


  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 9

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    A twisted take on a twisted prompt but so enjoyable to read... Another great write!
    Ken


  • Carolina Moon silver member
    July 9

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    Well hmm err, I feel kinda nauseated but in a good way I guess (if there is one) lmao Excellent take on the pic and your words do it more than justice. I love how you write what you think and how you express yourself, simply wonderful!! Hope ya win my friend!! Good luck!


  • Naridill
    July 9
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    Adorable.


  • Tattboyspet silver member
    July 9

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    yep, funny to me too (THAT'S why I enjoyed it!)
    This was DEFINITELY unique and so 'in your face' that I couldn't help but laugh at it!
    thank you for your entry

    p.s. imagery was superb and the snideness couldn't be missed!
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