all-inclusive realization
creates the god-man
who denies not
that assemblage
of both polarities
is the true core of
divinity entirely
Author notes
"The happiness of a man in this life does not consist in the absence but in the mastery of his passions."
- Alfred Lord Tennyson
A contest entry
- Quickie anyone? 7/20/20 by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended July 9, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A shade of something unique. I missed reading you. <3
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Awwwwwww
My feathery heathery!
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Congrats on your gold, this is deep and brilliantly done. Love, C
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touche! couldn't have said it better myself!
congrats on the gold
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An intriguing take on the prompt indeed. Straight forward, and still holding such great depth. Nicely done. Congrats on the goldie!
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Damn...This is excellent....
Well done and good luck in the contest!...although I don't think you'll need it... -
Yes indeed! We shouldn't deny those polarities!! Excellent take!! Really captures what the prompt is trying to say!
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like the use of polarities and true core ... well done.
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Dear lord.. I'm so backing out of this contest now..Lol.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt Brother.. I really liked where you went with it..
best of luck!! though I'm sure you don't need it 
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Angel
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good luck... Like I be thinking I'm going to need it going up against you.. lol
kat
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