Harmonious delirium,
bustles through the tremulous door,
of his silk mind.
As she glides in existence,
upon pen and paper.
Author notes
Prompt:
"The happiness of a man in this life does not consist in the absence but in the mastery of his passions."
- Alfred Lord Tennyson
20 Words
A contest entry
- Quickie anyone? 7/20/20 by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended July 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From July 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2800 points, ended November 18, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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I just love the whole piece, the imagery was amazing!
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oooooh!
I really like this. So simple, yet powerful.
Way to go! Kudos for you 'cause you so rock!
You are a true poet! Thanks for posting such a wonderful piece and keep up that killer writing!
The Famous Reese Bailey
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Excellently written Vik!
Short, sharp and powerful. Wonderful take on the prompt.
Bravo!!!
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Very nice take! Love 'Harmonious delirium' .. think my mind is like that! Excellent take
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ahhh .. love the diction and vivid imagery ...
Harmonious delirium??? oh yes .. perfect. Also nice separation ... I love this take.
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