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Blanket

She keeps me warm,
Always on top,
Unless I’m too damn hot.
Close to me, she’s always there,
Since I left my cot.

She makes me sweat,
Carries my tears,
Cradles my every dream.
Close to me, she helps me sleep,
Held within her seam.

When I’m not tired,
She’s forgotten,
She lies upon my bed.
Till I get home she lays in peace,
until I rest my head

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  • Sound of Madness
    July 9

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    Very nice. I really like this. It's very cute and sweet. It reminds me alot of my blanket. It's amazing how something so simple can be so special.

  • solitarytear
    July 9

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    love

    it.......the way you bring an object to life and give it substances....your work is amazing and something you should be proud of