I don't trust you.
I don't fucking trust you.
You took my heart and you ran a stampede of lies over it.
You told me you loved me.
But did you mean it?
You told me I was the only one but I found those numbers.
Seven fucking numbers that can turn love into hate at the press of one button.
Send.
I don't believe you.
I don't fucking believe you.
You told me that John was your friend.
You told me there was no one but me!
You told me that you wanted to marry me.
Infidelity is not a part of any marriage I will have.
When I pressed that button I heard another that was madly in love with your tongue.
Send.
Hello?
Hi, honey. how are you? Wanna come over and come?
Honey?
Oh... oh shit. Nate?
You damn right it's Nate.
End.
Click.
I don't love you anymore.
I don't fucking love you anymore.
I trusted you.
I gave you my all and it wasn't enough.
I gave you my virginity and you put it upon your wall of trophy fucks.
I gave you everything and it wasn't enough.
And with the push of a button, it was back to my parent's house.
Send.
Author notes
I promise to remain as your friend, but then again, I promised that our love would never end.
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awww sweety *hugs* awww you mad me cry you are an amazing wrighter you have a gift never forget that youer better then him. you have poeple hear who will always be hear
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i actually liked this. it was unique. i can honestly say i've never read anything like it. i can understand how this relates to the quote. there was a lot of power in this write. it's actually kinda mind boggling. so yes i definately enjoyed this piece a whole lot. there was kind of a lack of flow to it,but i think that's what makes it seem so unique to me. i can relate and it relates to the quote,so kudos. one more thing,i thought that the title was pretty cool too.
so good luck in the contest my friend!
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WOW!
This poem is really good! I love the pissed off energy and the powerful word choice. This is really my type of poem!
"I gave you my virginity and you put it upon your wall of trophy fucks."
That line kills!
Thanks for posting such a wonderful piece and keep up that killer writing!
The Famous Reese Bailey
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