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twin pillows

My pillow's clenched within my hands,
The one my eyes are making damp.
tears find the way to go,
they reach out for the unknown.
Then glazed over with my tears,
An angel from my dreams appears.
There's a vision of my bride,
As she cry’s on a pillow just like mine.
we share the same love,
and share the same dream,
That love could conquer the distance between.
When our time and place show mercy,
And you are finally here with me,
Our kisses will catch the teardrops as they flow.
Honey when you close your eyes,
And it hurts the most inside.
Find my picture through the tears on your pillow,
They're not falling all alone,
they're only coming home.

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  • interesting

    "There's a vision of my bride,
    As she cry’s on a pillow just like mine.
    we share the same love,
    and share the same dream,
    That love could conquer the distance between."

    thats like my favorite part.
    this is a really good poem
    the way you put the words together is...
    incredible.

    good job :]
    <333333shannon

  • wonderful

    Bias I know but I do so love the way you write....