i'm the beast
in the beasts head
as simple as can be
Arise demon
the time has come
rise early
Work hard
buy a new car
the beast within the beast
called man
Yes
where's your ambition
there's your ambition
that shiny piece of metal between your fingers
it's safe to say
life well spent
Author notes
sadbad_by_Heile
A contest entry
- Art by Heile #22 by Tattboyspet.
470 points, ended July 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Definitely a departure but interesting in where you took the prompt... Enjoyable read...
Ken
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This is rather confusing ... it came across as random thoughts to me (if you could possibly put an explanation on your train of thought in the AN it would help)
thank you for your entry
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sometimes i feel trapped by societies expectations that's what the pic made me think about
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