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Misty

Running through the open field, trying to catch the sun.
It slipped away before my reach and the mist began to fall.
Dampness came around me and amazed was I to find,
My life; much like that misty day trying to catch the sun.
I reached for a goal too far away, and tears ran down my cheeks. 

I stand alone within this field of errors and mistakes,
But now I know to reach not far for goals too far away.
May misty days stay far away, like the sun I tried to reach. 

There's a brighter day in the distance
One that is reachable and true.
So don't be down and forlorn,
Don't be miserable and blue.
For the sun is up there shining,
And it's shining down on you.

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  • queen Greeters member
    July 11

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi slinsicombe

    This is so lovely and full of hope it was a real treasure for me to read well done poet
    Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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