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Ernie

It was the end of senior year
a time when many cry.
A time for new beginnings
and a time to say good-bye.
This day I couldn't bear it
For Ernie held my heart.
now he was on crutches
me not wanting to part.

I offered to walk with him
carry books out to the car
putting keys in my pocket
I knew the walk was far.

Thinking he misplaced his keys

me silent as a stone,

wanting to delay goodbye

and trying to postpone.

 

Hobbling, we retraced our steps

his face grimaced in pain

all the while holding keys

afraid now to explain.

Finally on a little bench

we sat down to rest.

My heart overcome with guilt

I finally confessed.

 

Looking up into his eyes

and holding fearful breath

waiting for Ernie to explode

I was scared to death.

My eyes were met with autumn

his were filled with fun

The kiss was an explosion
it could have rocked the sun.

 

I saw the stars behind my eyes

and felt a lifetime's thrill

my grip on his keys loosened

The universe stood still. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

His name is Ernie Victorino and I never saw him again after that day. I touch my lips and the kiss comes back to me ... the 4th of July happening behind my eyes.

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  • What a wonderful memory to have, and how well you have written about it. It seems in the end the memories are all we have left, if we are fortunate enough to be able to remember. Forgive my response, I am in a reflective mood tonight. Strangely this brought back memories of my mother and a visit when she no longer knew my name or who I was, suddenly her eyes lit up and she said, "I know, you're the one with the heart." That has lived with me ever since, one of the sweetest things she ever said to me. I hoped somewhere inside she really knew it was me. Oh, I have ruined the mood, supplanting your beautiful. happy memory with my semi-sad one. Be assured it was not your poem, but my mind. Loved the poem, so well written and happy.

  • wow you have me touching my lips remembering someones kiss now, gah i hate memories *stuffs tears in my locket*
    this is a wonderful poem, really,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • paw-writer silver member
    July 9

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    This is a very touching write about some wonderful memories. That kiss you got sounds exciting. Nice write, and thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty