I'm sitting against my dresser,
Crying,
Thinking of you.
Your worth my tears.
We share the fears.
One cut, cut me cold.
Then I died.
Then I smiled,
And then.....
You tried to attempt suicide!
You tried to pay homicide!
And my spirit didn't like it when it saw you....
Your the resound why i cried!
Your the resound why i died...
Your the resound why i love you.......
Author notes
This is a begining of a song i wrote when i was thinking of my boyfriend and i was cold....it might not make scence but it makes scence to me....
Comments
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Very intense, and very well-written. Nice job.
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not bad. you do have some typos, however they are minimal in number.
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