Onerous words hold solace,
within his swayed heart.
As he racks his consciousness,
to compile the universes canto.
Thus fueling the filament of,
the slaved moonlit pendulum.
Author notes
The Poet And The Pendulum by Iribel
(found at deviantart.com.. please credit artist)
27 Words
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt # 2 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 10, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me your Gold! by Nicada.
500 points, ended August 15, 2008, 8 entries
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Let me know how I did....
Comments
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You did a great job relating to the picture prompt. So much was said in so few words. This is powerful! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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Superb use of vocab and imagery ... Love how your mind works.
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Beautifully done! Capturing the picture so well... definitely feel this!
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Oooo, like that title! The burden of his words a comfort as he write - a timeless responsibility.
Marlene
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Wicked take on the picture. Good luck in the contest
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Well Done!
I enjoyed this write. Tbh, it's not as powerful as some of your others, but it still manages to hit the spot!
Bravo Vik
'D'
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