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Another Face In The Crowd

 

Individuality outspoken,
though often quite broken.
I need to change who I am,
so incomplete due to the sins of man.

If I stand up and ask for your saving grace,
will you deem me as just another pretty face?
Can your sympathy not expand to where I dwell?
Which if things don't change, it will be hell.

Save me from my circumstances,
let me be granted second chances.
I refuse to be just another face in the crowd,
another name to be forgotten.

I may kill the calendar with wasted efforts
and meaningless days,
but still my outpouring is genuine.

Am I too lost to be saved?

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  • I love it! I really do, it shows your determination to stick out an dit describes me to a T. So thank you for entering!
  • The wonderful thing about God is that no one is too lost to be saved. "I may kill the calendar with wasted efforts and meaningless days, but still my outpouring is genuine" This really stood out to me.

    Warmest,
    Mylee
  • Wonderfully penned a great piece I hope you win the contest. You have a true talent. Keep writing, so I have something worthwhile to read. ~mandie~
  • Hoodwinked

    Hey there very nice piece that you have penned here I wish you much luck in the contest best wishes and much love

  • yes. wretched typos. lol
    thanks for letting me know
  • Your second final stanza holds the strongest imagery for me, personally as I read.
    Fantastic poem!
    Just one small thing, the 3rd line in your 2nd stanza, the word
    'dweill' do you mean 'dwell'?

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

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