Bronzed shell,
walking upon the beach,
darkening beneath the warming rays.
Blue orbs,
reflecting pools of wisdom,
sparkling as she plays within the surf.
Moistured lips,
holding faint promises,
of the vitality of the soul that resides inside.
Delicate features,
emboldened upon her face,
betraying the strength laying in reserve
Raven locks,
cascading to her shoulders,
drying in the midday sun.
Graceful curves,
speaking of femininity, scream
of the passion held tightly at bay.
Gentle sways,
resulting from each step,
holding myself enamored with her presence.
Artful limbs,
finding purpose through welcoming embraces,
as she pulls you near, holding you close.
Elusive spirit,
always in motion, seeking peace,
riding currents of air, dancing throughout.
Summarily speaking,
awakening desire to greater heights,
stirring these tides of affection
Descriptively failing,
To speak of the true beauty that lives,
at the core, of this example of God’s creativity..
Author notes
An attempt to write descriptively, with tenderness of another. To share individual characteristics, which when taken as a whole generate passion. Unequiovically, I must say that this is only the tip of the true intrensic essence of this woman.
Let me state also, the body dims in comparison to the woman who resides within it. For it is that abstract presence that stirs me so, I count myself fortunate to know her.
Photo Credit:Woman on Beach @ photobucket by phoyboy28. Used in lieu of an actual picture. (For had I done so, would have meant my hide being nailed to the nearest wall)
A contest entry
- PASSION by TwilightPanther.
500 points, ended July 15, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was a grat way of looking at a womans overall beauty which many men overlook..Congrats withthe gold!
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This is very voluptuous. Speak from your own mouth on this woman. Make me jealous of her, make other women that read this poem jealous of her..because your desire for her is so powerful. I love this write. It's very descriptive, you pick your pictures and you paint them. But I feel as though I'm looking at a scene of two people you observed. What did the poet feel as he observed these two..or this woman..?
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Very good work here
You ave painted the most loving picture of this beautiful creation of life . Yet without the beauty from within the outside is no mrore than a shell
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OOOOh....this is stunning! I love the image you've captured in your words...how they just skim the surface.
Thanks for sharing this!!! and all the best in the contest,
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The beauty flowing from your magic pen warms my heart softly...you have taken that woman of your heart and totally shown her beauty and inner strength...I stand in AWE!
niaish for entering!
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My Dear Friend,
your comment does my heart and spirit good.
Yes she does have much beauty and inner strength. There are untapped rivers of strength yet to be discovered within her.
I am grateful for the oppritunity to write for you in this contest.
It will be the last offering composed here for awhile, so I am glad it has been well received.
Many thanks,
With Love,
Silent Hawk
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Wow
i love the description
and the wording
where some would be lewd and vulgar
you turned the picture into so much more than a girl on a beach
i am in awe
and am completely jealous.
good job :]
<333shannon
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Many Thanks,
for your kind thoughts and words upon this offering. I am touched by the warmth of your comment.
Blessed Be
Silent Hawk
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