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castles in the sky

the vow's you spoke
the pledge you took
words without honor

the tale's you told
falsely delusions
not a grain of truth

i've felt you love
its colliding blow
smash into my face

i've know you passion
the hurtful thrust
your punishing assault

integrity and devotion
have no place here
in my castle in the sky








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  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 9

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    wow this is interesting take on the prompt...... i like this.... great job you have penned thank you for sharing this and entering adn goodluck in this contest......!