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[ Dear heart...why do i even try? ]

Dear heart...why do i even try?
I get yelled at for being in the way
But,
When I hide in my closet out of the way,
I get yelled at for never being around.
I,
Don't,
Get,
It.

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My parents where yelling at me today so i just thought id wright what was on my mind =]

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 9

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    "I get yelled at for being in the way
    But,
    When I hide in my closet out of the way,
    I get yelled at for never being around."

    I think that's something alot of us have felt and can relate to


  • hamid
    July 9

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    Good

    Good, altough simple but really heart touching, good way of expressing you thoughts, keep writing, its really a unique way of poetry, i reallly like it! have a nice day!