Take me out let me be
When I am lost oh set me free
Take me out of this life
Pull me away from the bleeding knife
Despite all of the tears I've cried
I am not the one who died
When lost in life and shrouded in doubt
You're the one who brings me out
Take me out end this pain
Please don't let me cry out in vain
Take me out let me see
Through the world and what it can be
Despite all of the tears I've cried
I am not the one who died
When lost in life and shrouded in doubt
You're the one who brings me out
You're the one you took the pain
So I would not cry out in vain
You're the one you took the pain
So I would not cry out in vain
You're the one you took the pain
So I would not cry out in vain
Take me out set me free
So I can be what you want me to be
Take me out by your grace
I give thanks by the tears on my face
Despite all of the tears I've cried
I am not the one who died
When lost in life and shrouded in doubt
You're the one who brings me out
Take me out
Take me out
Take me out
Author notes
This is a song I wrote last night thinking about the last few months of my life, and how they have affected and changed me. Yet through all of the paint, tears, and hurt, I was eventually brought out of it by staying strong and faithful. Hope you like it.
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Comments
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Um...
I really really really liked this poem
its probably one of the best ones i have read in a while.
my favorite part would have to be:
"Despite all of the tears I've cried
I am not the one who died
When lost in life and shrouded in doubt
You're the one who brings me out"
seriously though, good job :]]
<33shannon
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I like it alot... I can really see how it's a song... I know these past couple of months have been rough for you... you've reflected alot more than you can see... I'm very happy that you're able to fight through it... and just to let you know, you're not fighting alone... we have common problems...
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good But
really heart touching, but i remember another poem of Qazi Ahkam with the same theme, you can seart ahkam on all poetry and see his poem "let me be"
any how really heart touching only the start of the poem confuse me. Keep writing poet good work, don't mind i was not critisizing you poem just i remember that poem with the same theme, i know its your own ideas and thoughts but amazingly its theme was similer to another!
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