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Sprung

Missing image
Slithering...

            tongue flicking,

Unheeded needs

            roil.

Throbbing desires coiled

            SPRING....

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Julian McMahon

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  • Congratulations on your Silver JC. Wonderful writing and imagery here. You went with the prompt alright and produced a stunning piece.

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    Wayne Leon


  • Amazira
    July 9
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    This is great, Jcat.

    You did find what I missed. Nice take on this prompt. He is somewhat of a snake.


  • ennovy silver member
    July 9

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    Look at the man....Sprung, spring, sprang....he's all of that and a bowl of chips...nice write love....I enjoyed the read...novy

  • Great words, wonderful imagery ~ well crafted... x

  • hamid
    July 9
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    Good words, really unique type of english poetry, heart touching good work poet!
  • I like the title of this. I haven't heard that word in awhile. lol

    great job at writing this. your word usage was great.

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