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Darkened Savoirs

You've walked off into another time
Another place, Where life is full of dobt
And in the end,
Darkness wins,

 
  A shattered rose
  Lays bleeding by your side
  It's thorns are jaded
  Just like your life,
  Another promise broken
  Silence fills the air you breathe
  And you're still broken.....

  The life you chose
  Was desilated,
  You held out hopeful
  But it was way to over rated
 
  Now your looking for me again
  This has to end
  I've found a new begining --

    And in the end
    My friend,
    Death was there for me
    When I needed it,


  Your tortured past
  Laid colour blind
  In an empty grave
  In front of you-
  And now that it's gone
  How fast -
  Can you find your way through.

  You told your story
  Under lying eyes
  Resepitcle tounges
  Bid you one last goodbye
  So why can't you get on with your life
  And leave me be with mine
  I'm doing just fine.....

  You hesitated
  Til the flames did you in
  And you ain't getting into heaven
  Until you break me again...

  And in the end
  My friend
  Death was there for me
  When I needed it,

  How many bullets
  Can you see in the chamber
  I might have been a fool
  But I never gave in
  How many bullets
  Do you think it will take save you
  When we meet again.....
 
 

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Comments

  • interesting

    i am not really good at leaving comments on poems
    but i really like this poem.
    the wording in intense.

    i loved this part:

    " A shattered rose
    Lays bleeding by your side
    It's thorns are jaded
    Just like your life,
    Another promise broken
    Silence fills the air you breathe
    And you're still broken....."

    good job :]]
    <3333shannon