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Ending

Waiting for the play back
Everyone wants a little pay back
And I see you
Wasting yourself away
Like
You wouldn't last another day
And if you could you would
End everything today
My mouth keeps moving
I keep screaming
But I'm the only one
Who is hearing
How the world is ringing
How somethings I still feel
Only keep up with the stinging
I hate to admit to myself
I'll never make it right
Knowing I'll lose you
And everything else tonight

Author notes

I wanna poem with the title 'Before Dawn'
...
Any suggestions?

Kia Tenshi

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  • The Nonrhymer silver member
    August 31

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    This sounds almost like a song. This really shows the devestating lonliness I've felt before. This is awsome!


  • Keikou Tenshin
    July 9
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    *GASP*
    We could do a collab.
    =D
    Yes yes.
    We could.


    • Kia Tenshi
      July 10
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      Yesh...we could...but where would we have it kept before 'tis finished?

      • Keikou Tenshin
        July 14
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        Dunno.
        We could separately save it to our own computers.
        Notepad is a good thing. =D

        • Kia Tenshi
          July 16
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          And afterwards we both could save a copy to our accounts...

          Okay...you wanna start it then?

          • Keikou Tenshin
            July 16
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            You should start it, because...
            I seem to be going through a poetic recession right now. X_x And I can't think of a thing.
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