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Her

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Legs spread out before me,
licking her sweetly as my juices flow.

Arching towards me as my finger glides in.
My body responds as I undress.

Breast to breast our nipples hard.
Passionately kissing, lusting.

Toys at play,
inside and out,
deeply.

We mesh together,
pussies as one.

Life is wonderful.....
want to join?

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  • Swtpoetryman
    December 25, 2008
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    FUCKING A - THIS NAUGHTY BOY WANTS TO JOIN IN!

    or I'd be HAPPY just to watch, Baby - with my pecker in my hand stroking to the rhythm or your movement - BUT most of all I'd like to feel your toys deep inside of my man-cunt too - and to be fucked by the both of you with long and thick strap-ons would be HEAVENLY to say the least. Thanks for submitting to my contest & making my Christmas a VERY MEERY & KINKY ONE!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • gllarso
    December 20, 2008
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    WOW! Beautifully written and described so well I can almost see what is transpiring. I love how you started out with longer phrases but as the poem got more urgent and passionate you showed that with the shorter phrases. Very well done and I love the invitation you left at the end...very enticing.

    -Garrett

  • cherrysmile
    July 9, 2008
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    i love this good write


  • Galaxy2
    July 9, 2008

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    'Legs spread out before me'
    Are they open enough for you, my love?
    'Licking her sweetly as my juices flow'
    Oh my...how wonderful!
    What else could I ask for!
    'Arching towards me as my finger glides in'
    Oh yes...I need a deep finger fuck, honey!
    'My body responds as I undress'
    What a sight!
    My Venus!
    'Breasts to breasts our nipples hard'
    One of my fantasies...the dream-come-true...
    'Passionately kissing, lusting...
    Yes...more...more, my sweetheart!
    'Toys at play'
    I always wanted to be your toy, baby!
    'inside and out'
    add anther finger, cutie!
    'deeply'
    yes...my love!...as deep as possible...
    'We mesh together
    pussies as one'
    yes, sweetie, I love it....your pussy on top of mine...grinding...

    Oh my....I wish I could have you NOW!
    Erotis kisses on all your sweet and juicy zones....

    Galaxy2


  • Nellas
    July 8, 2008
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    umm, this is wonderful, really but I need to know what your name is and how it applies here?

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