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Birthed

Missing image
And yet she wonders....

          {Rebirthed}

Through her tears

           Was she loved even once??

Life brought upon her

           Choices....

Non existant!

She was simply a birth of tragedy

Author notes

20-30 words

Credit Artist: Birth of Tragedy by mysticcharm

http://mysticcharm.deviantart.com/art/Birth-of-Tragedy-71107457

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 10

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    I agree with the concept of this piece. It is so true. So many kids are born into a life not of their making. Born into tragedy. There is a deepness to this piece that touches the soul. Keep writing JC. Stunning work here.

    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • ennovy silver member
    July 9

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    Wow so many children are born to tragedy, I love the way you wrote this free verse... it touched my emotions novy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 9

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    Sometimes choices do seem non existant.. I can so relate to that! This is such a deeply sad piece that I can read so much into!


  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 9

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    such deep sadness this has. and yet it does leave you thinking and contemplating. plus, it has a wonderful pic to accompany it.