10 minutes to midnight
and damn I feel at home here
It's been a while since I've left the house
But it's only been two hours I've stayed
It's been a while since I've had
a good family dinner
with a mother serving
and a dad at the head
This isn't my family though
And I am a transient ghost
I am a hired hand,
and I will move on
I will till their fields and teach their daughter
And they pay me cheaply in good conversation
In good food and good art
I could learn to love this life
But it is 10 minutes ot midnight
and my house is across the wastelands
across the black fabric sprinkled with flicking lights
So I drive away from a family and a house
away from a girl I loved once
It's been a while since I've sat
behind the wheel of this car
But I am a transient ghost,
and I climb out of her,
2 minutes to midnight.
Even she cannot hold me
though I ask them all to caress me.
A contest entry
- Love Is A Verb by SerenityNChains.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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This has a very surreal quality to it. A unique, gritty style. I truly enjoyed every line. It does not truly fit the premise of the contest, but it drew me in for closer inspection. A wonderful bit of penning.
Serenity



