Full moon doth attempt to conceal amongst gray clouds
Hiding tears for lone figure
now blinded ,chained and shackled in worlds reality
Forever denied beauties vision and touch at arms length.
Author notes
Pic ....The Poet And The Pendulum by Iribel my take on it
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt # 2 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 10, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great last line - denied beauty's vision and touch at arms length, also liked the sympathetic moon.
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Thank you for your time in reading and commenting. I pleased that you found some enjoyment in my ramblings.
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Ahh reality can be something to cause tears indeed! You've captured the picture very well here! Thank you!
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It is I that thanks you for making me think.
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Wow awesome take on the prompt, love this! Good luck
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