Go.
Come back.
Wait.
Don't go.
Stay.
Wait.
Just a moment while I suffer happily.
And Think of what's next here.
Smile.
Dance.
Smile and dance and smile and dance
Oh! Keep that movement!
Breathe and twitch
Shake your hair
Away from your
Shy face waiting...
Move!
Even when you sleep
I stave away the dark
On leaned elbow
Just to watch you
Inhale shallow...
Move.
Go.
Come back...
I'll wait for dawn.
I'll make the coffee and eggs.
I will stay.
A contest entry
- Love Is A Verb by SerenityNChains.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very unique write, interesting style. Somewhat hectic and chaotic, but easily conveys the idea of infatuation, of love. Wonderfully penned entry, thank you and best of luck.
Serenity
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I'll wait for dawn. I'll make the coffee and eggs. I will stay.
i'd be willing to bet that every woman who has ever been offered a one night stand wishes that this were the note she found on her pillow when she awoke in the morning. thank you for sharing this with me tonight. hopefully the one you are with tonight will believe this in the morning. viyanna rosemarie
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Hmmmm
tres interesting...very different style..I like it and will read more! Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
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