genesis gathers in blood spots
air coats skin like cellophane
to strip essence of cradled innocence
which warm womb kept safely frozen
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt # 1 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 9, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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yep - amazing imagery here! loved your second line (it just slapped me in the face!)
congrats on the silver
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You know.. we are losing our innocence from the day we are born really aren't we? And we're dying from the minute we are born too...
Intense and brilliant take on the prompt!
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I love this one from you!!! WOW......intense imagery and verbage! Very well done and best wishes
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I'm glad you liked it. Is it sad that it is easier for me to write something like this, than it is to write of birth as a positive experience?
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Well....have you given birth?
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Only to poetry. heh
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Well Done Brother
All the best to ya,
wonderfully expressed for the given prompt!
Peace, brother Timothy
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I think this a very great take on the picture. And the idea of birth makes it ever greater.
Nice imagery. I clicked on the picture and realized I didn't even need to look at it.
~Angel/Kori
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nice imagery of birth. best to you in this contest blessings always~ Trisha
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wow pretty amazing my friend. Love your take on the prompt. Best of luck to ya!!!
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Stop using words that hurt my brain! lol.. I'm just kidding brother.. You did a wonderful job.. I love the imagery and emotion here. you did great.. Best of luck!!
Angel
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