As if living out a fantasy
I walk around with my head in a fog
mind clouded by your love
and soul overwhelmed by your passion.
In a dream state with no need for reality,
I am only in need of what you give
and I only give what you need...
Love, security, me...
and you is all. All is you and me.
A potent combination exploding
whenever we touch even if its only
with our minds as we agree that
forever is you... and me and you is
eternity.
As if my life is almost over
I love so strongly -you...
my last hope for loving and living.
I breath you into my lungs as you
are my life. My heart beats to the
rhythm of your soul as my pulse gyrates
pushing my blood through my veins
and I am revived by you and we are alive...
Living, sharing, one...
and one is one. One is you and me.
A divine love created by the hands of God
to prove to the world that true love still exists
even if its only within our minds as we agree that
forever is you...and me and you is
eternity.
A contest entry
- prewrites by aeolia.
400 points, ended October 26, 2008, 130 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - .•¤**¤•. Love .•¤**¤•. by XBeautiful MistakeX.
550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A wonderful free verse!
Rich with imagery and flowing prose!
Excellent write my friend!
Free verse is not easy to do well and you have sparkled at it!
Regards,
Jennifer
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Kim,
this is the most enchanting poem I've read in a Long time about TRUE LOVE. It really does exists and as I read the passion that spills from your heart, it's truly amazing and shows you even the more a lovely person.
Wishing you all the best,
ephiphany
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