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Poisoned By The Love Of A Rose

Missing image

Grasping poisoned-ivy,


scaling her balcony,

 


I fell ...

 

into rosed cheeks  



Author notes

Prompt is painting
titled Castle-Green Balcony by Karen Winters

A contest entry

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  • Once Upon A Mind
    July 9

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    Ahh, such a marvelous take on the painting... So seductive Congrats on HM


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    July 9
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    Just stunning... x

  • jcat gold member
    July 9

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    Simply stunning!!! A very deeply romantic piece by you! You saw something here that I failed to! Very well done and best wishes

  • garde a l eau
    July 8

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    ...something Casanova would do? yeah, Pirate!

    Reading this again, I realize I did not note in my comment that I also found these brief words not only beautiful poetry, but sad, and love unrequited, for appearances can be deceiving and beauty a tender trap. ~K