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What more can you want
when you already
have it all?
my friendship, your space,
my heart, your security,
my body, your ultimate freedom
all within your grasp.
"I am happy" escapes
your beautiful lips.
But as I swim
in the blue rivers
of your eyes
I see that something has gone stale
in your planning.
You have left me,
accidentaly
leaving only yourself.
and I wonder
if this is what you
truly wanted









what if I really was gone

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  • catie052 gold member
    July 23

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    This is truely amazing. such deep emotion and depth. you make me want to cry!
    A great piece!!

  • I'd grow new legs
    on the sides of me you use to cling to
    and crawl away
    gasping
    for someone
    who would follow me anywhere.