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What I am is you!

I lay it down for you my king.
I don't want it anymore.

My life is only for you.
I will go into the city's and teach about you.

You pulled me through everything.
You waited for me to find you.

You did not give up on me.
You are my Lord Jesus Christ.

I will praise you for ever.
I don't want me I want you.

God you are holy and you are my King of Kings.
You are more than anyone or anything.

You hold my life in your hands and I don't want it any-other way.

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  • Poetess4JC silver member
    August 7

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    In the last line "why" shoud be "way". In the fourth line "vity's" should be "cities". I like this poem because you spoke with complete honesty and were not ashamed to testify about what the Sovereign King has done for you. You recognize tht He alone is God and that besides Him, there is no other.

    "I will praise you for ever.
    I don't want me I want you."

    These two lines spoke more volumes of power and wisdom that you didn't even know. I commend you for writing this piece. Keep the pen flowing and He willsurely bless you!