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[ Your music, your station in a world ]

Your music, your station in a world
of woe that you hide beneath, what
is it you do with the love that holds
you in this lyrical syphony of the
love you hold within your being of the
never lasting discussion of forevermore
what is it that you cry from the deepest
depths of your soul, come to me my everlasting
love that is your wonderous  man of forever more
why do you run from me in the embrace of lovers
killing me to make one last appeal in the moving
world that is beyond my imagination of love,
stop and stare wondering why your are there and
not here, come back to me where in this life I
would be to focus out of the wedding of life
will this be the end or the begining of our love
in this world of strife. 

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  • LivinitupCutie
    July 9, 2008

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    So much sadness and emotions in this write..for some reason it seems to me it's like a lyric when I read this but get wrong it's just my opppion..wonderfully written..thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    Keep penning!!
    Lieu


  • Sadistic klown girl gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    Wonderfully written. Keep up the good work. The emotion in this poem hit hard.