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Sahara

walking
 
 
Purchasing forever
to escape to my Sahara

Leaving you behind
 
 

Author notes

Pic came from this contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2413193

A contest entry

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  • shattered gypsy
    July 23

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    Dang. Very well done. Interesting picture though! "leaving you behind" Genius.

    Warmest,
    MYlee

  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 11

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    Great

    I love how perfectly the piece fits in with the pic prompt. Leaving you behind...my favorite line. Great write dearest. ~mandie~
  • carole21
    July 9
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    ha ha

    nice write for the prompt . . congrats on the trophy


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    July 9
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    Deeply meaningful... x

  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 8

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    Short and sweet. Nice. The last line was very painful. Well, to be left behind... it gets to some people. Since I am always left behind. Very nice take on the picture though. Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing, until you can't no more!

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~

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