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Psalm of the Kibritcikiz Goddess

Your love is a storm
A hurricane
A wild-child whirlwind
A low-pressure zone
Whipping my heart
(and my hair)
Into a frenzy.

Your passion is a ship
surfing my waves
Exploring the Ocean
That is Me
Funneling  a wake
Through my curls
(And my psyche.)

Oh Wild Adventurer
Open your ears to my Siren wail
Bring me aboard your New Argos
Soothe me with wine and song
(And I'll let you
play with my hair...)






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  • Angelflower gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    This was a really interesting and unique take on the prompt.. You really did a wonderful job.. I love Mythology and you somehow weaved that in this poem.. Good job!! I really enjoyed it.. Thank you very much for sharing this.. best of luck.

    Angel


  • KayJay
    July 8, 2008

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    Very nice... mixing in the mythology reference adds to classic feel of this... and just a touch of humor is a perfect finsh... Well done and best of luck...
    Ken