Beautiful girl
With no name
Come sail off with me
We will make
A life off the Sea
Be free
Come sail away
With me
Oh yes come sail away
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything!!! by LivinitupCutie.
450 points, ended July 28, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Me Some Happy Poems by FloridaGatorQueen.
475 points, ended July 29, 2008, 11 entries
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600 points, ended July 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was so sweet, I loved the repition to reinforce the message and I thought the whole poem created a beautiful image. I could really imagine two lovers escaping away in the horizon. I also liked the opening as i felt it really added to the affection in the piece and gave it a bit more meaning. Well done on a really nice write.
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This is such a sweet poem. I am sure the girl would like to sail with ya. It sounds nice. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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this makes me go awww..heartfelt one...beautifully done I say..thank you for entering in my contest and good luck..
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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My Dear friend,
What a job! This is amazing! Something in this one, sounds so personal, almost like I am invading on something private and personal!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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