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dark angel

dark angel


an angel I am inside
darkness covers my wings
can you not fell the light inside
or is it hard to see
dark angel is that who I am
stuck between the light and dark inside
is there anyone to save me
as I reach to the heavens
a voice sets me free
beautiful angel have no fear
you are who you are
for that there should be no tears

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  • Guerrero
    November 14, 2008
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    this is really good.. wow..beautiful.. easily relatable..good luck


  • Angelflower
    July 12, 2008

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    You did a really good job.. I really like the emotion that you brought out of the prompt here.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel